E.E. Cummings was able to
captivate me by his modern-esque style of poetry and prose around the summer of
my sophomore year in high school. My personal favorites of his works
included Maggie and Milly and Molly and May with the beautiful
line, “For whatever we lose (like a you or a me)
it's always ourselves we find in the sea.”, Somewhere
I have Never Travelled, Gladly Beyond, and The Boys I mean are
not refined. Encountering his poem entitled “9” in class was something that rekindled my excitement. Because E.E. Cummings was known for his themes on
love and sex[1] as
well as his unique disregard for capitalization and punctuation[2],
he was appreciated by both the young and old alike.
9 is a poem that is no exception of Cummings' brilliantly unabashed exhibition of his new style of writing prose.
there
are so many tictoc
clocks
everywhere telling people
what
toctic time it is for
tictic
instance five toc minutes toc
past six
tic
The first stanza
illustrates the short-lived moments that people experience in life. The theme
of the passage, I think, is that time is a grave enemy of man. While reading
the 'tictoc's and 'toctic's in the passage, I was, sufficed to say, annoyed. In
application, when one is being rushed or is constantly pressured by time,
he/she is usually displeased by this.
Spring
is not regulated and does
not get
out of order nor do
its
hands a little jerking move
over
numbers slowly
we do not
wind it
up it has no weights
springs
wheels inside of
its
slender self no indeed dear
nothing
of the kind.
The second and the third
stanza highlights the contrasting effect of time; Spring, which usually means a
new beginning- a beautiful thing after the fleeting moments in time.
Cummings was able to describe spring as (1) not regulated, (2) does not get out
of order, and (3) despite time passing, spring always comes. The third
description rings true to the first and second description in a way that spring
always takes places when anyone does not need to control or maintain it.
(So, when
kiss Spring comes
we'll
kiss each kiss other on kiss the kiss
lips
because tic clocks toc don't make
a toctic
difference
to
kisskiss you and to
kiss me)
The last stanza, as I see it, is the most striking part of the poem. Without the repetition of 'kiss' and 'tic toc's, it is "So, when spring comes we'll kiss each other on the lips because clocks don't make a difference to you and to me". The conglomeration of spring and time by E.E. Cummings. Such a simple but magnificent way to say that true love transcends time. The romantic in me is in awe, I might have to overuse that line and write it on the margins and back portions of my notebooks (and yes, embarrassingly, I still do that). The cynic in me, however, will scrutinize the alliteration of kiss and the sound of time passing on a clock as a dreamlike and ephemeral characteristic of all romantic love. On the other hand, my cynicism depends if I'm having a hormonal imbalance.
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